LeutnantSchweinehund

If you're insulted, that is a shame. There is not much I can do about that, I'm afraid. If most people don't like the licorice, then logic would dictate that ...

Eh, I don't really think I'll be doing much more writing, to be honest. If you look at what I wrote, it's not even a story as much as it ...

Insulting, eh? Oh well, I suppose. Anyway, you're right. It's raw and unfinished, and since I don't intend to be a writer by profession anyway, I suppose it doesn't matter ...

You alright, friend?

Well I'm glad at least someone found some form of entertainment in it. Sentences can be restructured, grammar can be fixed, and I will do this with all three (potentially ...

Don't try to sugarcoat it, you really don't have to. It sucks, I realize. I'm not at a skill level sufficient to write epics yet, and I'm plying at something ...

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Actually, knowing myself, I'll grieve for a few weeks and write another atrocity. That seems to be the cycle at hand. So I probably won't quit, even though no one ...

I suppose you're right. Another failure of mine. I wanted to pull a Gilgamesh, really. Just felt like writing a story about some guy who wanted to be immortal and ...

I did not write this. Accidentally posted, I think.

Well, you seem to have a valid reason for your decisions. Fair enough, I withdraw some of my accusations! For now... Yes, for now... I commend you on that, actually. ...

I say, this was genuinely fun to read. I didn't have time to read the whole thing, but I went through about a third, and it flowed surprisingly well! I ...

Well, you managed to justify most of my nitpicks. All good there. With the futile thing. Let me explain. "Futile" is an adjective. It's a trait of a noun. For ...

Definitely agree. It is very important to remain informed, provided you have valid sources. I personally believe the best sources are state-funded, if you live in a country with a ...

Why is it rated for mature content? For a minute, I was afraid you'd defile Mario and destroy my childhood memories. Now I'm left confused...