Lethargic

This is an amazing poem from you! I think its main appeal is its simplicity. It’s a very beautiful poem with amazing choices in words and metaphors. I love the ...

Thanks for dedicating your 150th review to my humble story! I%u2019m glad my characterization for Evan has improved. I%u2019m gonna look at making some revisions based on your critiques. Also, ...

I updated this post to include my recent revisions, most of which were to give Evan more characterization, as that was my biggest concern. Hopefully he feels more interesting and ...

I’m about to edit the work to include suggestions made by the reviewers, so if you go back and read the reviews, some of them might be outdated as of ...

The parasite bit was me trying to establish Evan as a germaphobe, but I think I should have added a few more details implying that detail of his character.

Thanks for such a long and thorough critique! I%u2019d actually been worrying that Evan was lacking in interesting characterization despite being the main character and taking up a lot of ...

This is a really neat story. I’d say your biggest strength here is that you write really vivid descriptions. Everything is in such vivid detail which really helps sell the ...

This is a really neat story. I’d say your biggest strength here is that you write really vivid descriptions. Everything is in such vivid detail which really helps sell the ...

This is a really neat story. I’d say your biggest strength here is that you write really vivid descriptions. Everything is in such vivid detail which really helps sell the ...

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That’s a really gripping first line. It immediately establishes the relentlessly fearful mood of the entire story and immediately gets the reader’s attention. The case of mistaken identity was an ...