LeonieLacey

You know, that one about the clock, in the back of your copy today. It was something like Tick tocthe clock strikes three' or something. i can't reall remember but ...

I am in gardening while writing this. i just got that message now. you didn't lose that poem!

So it was B1 who inspired you on this poem Chynel? Interesting. I didn't know you wrote about B1. Hand on heart, i didn't laugh, seriously. Like i said before, ...

This poem is really beautiful, very impressive. I love the first four lines, they were elegant and a great choice of words. keep on writing!

It was a very long poem, but i like your style, it is simple and easy to read and understand. I also like the issue you are writing about in ...

Very powerful poem-love it! The rhyming is exceptional

This poem is really cool-i really love the message and the concept. I particularly like the second stanza-very good choice of words and it has a nice rhythm. keep writing!

Really nice poem...very unique and original.

Thanks for reviewing this poem, it really helped. i'm new to this site, so i'm still figuring things out, and that was my first post. The review was great, and ...