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Lenora742

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Horror Re: .

    Thanks so much for your review! I was trying to keep it short(thus the fast pace of the story), but I think I'm going to work on some of AttackOfTheFlash ...

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Horror Re: .

    Thanks for your review! I wasn't aware that you should make new paragraphs for different character actions(I didn't even know about the dialogue one, until I was researching some tips ...

    Jan 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: .

    It's no big deal, I just don't want you to think such a thing. Sorry If i seemed rather defensive.. I tend to be easily offended, which I know I ...

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: .

    I looked that book up(because I wasn't sure what "Thirteen Reasons Why" was), and realized it is slightly similar. But no. The plot and theme is not even close. Based ...

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: 2 minutes

    I would love to see a part two. Let me know when you post it! :) ~Nora

    Jan 17, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Chapter 1 flashback

    No problem! I'm eager to read your next chapter. Can't wait till ya write it ^-^

    Jan 16, 2015
  • Short Story » Realistic, Romantic Re: Truth or Dare? Part 1

    Hey there! I know you already have a few reviews, but I thought I'd give another :) Overall, I loved this story. When her and Jake started kissing and Tyler ...

    Jan 15, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Spiritual Re: Only You Can Satisfy

    Just wanted to point out, there's a link of him singing it, at the top. :) (I think that's him singing it, at least?)

    Jan 13, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Culture Re: Blank Draft

    I just wanted to share my thoughts: Firstly, even though I'm a Christian, as is WindSailor, We believe in a God that does not give us straight forward proof that ...

    Jan 13, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Culture Re: Blank Draft

    It was simply written to be given to my teacher, so I didn't write too much more to it. I feel that since everyone has separate beliefs and they would ...

    Jan 13, 2015
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Culture Re: Blank Draft

    Thanks for this kind review. I'm so happy to know my response was thought-provoking, as that was my goal! :)

    Jan 13, 2015
  • Other » Review, Realistic Re: Letters for Literature Submission

    Just wanted to point out, This was apparently written for an English assignment, as a letter. (That's what the description says). It seems like you think it's a fiction story, ...

    Jan 11, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: How to Fool Innocent People (edited)

    Wow. Just. Wow. xD I feel so pathetic now.

    Jan 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: .

    Thank you so much xD I only got the guts to post this, because of your encouragement. I actually like your suggestion better, it makes it sound smooth, and keeps ...

    Jan 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Why Are We So Stubborn?

    Personally, I felt like it ended well with "Independence doesn't mean, That we can't rely on anyone." However, if you feel it's incomplete, fix it up till you're satisfied! As ...

    Jan 9, 2015


If you pick up a starving dog and make him prosperous, he will not bite you; that is the principal difference between a dog and a man.
— Mark Twain