Lena.Wooldridge

thank you very much, where are you from? i'm curious :)

congrats on your first review! it was sure a lot better than my first review! that being said, welcome to YWS and feel free to seek my help whenever questions ...

thanks a lot for the review. I intended to make it surprising. I can explain entirely why, but I think it's somewhat irrelevant. Regardless I'll give you a concise version. ...

It's pretty rude and intolerant to assume everyone on this website is a Christian, or even a monotheist in general, and that you can force your opinions upon them.

Hey thanks a lot, I really appreciate this review. Most of the reviews I get on here are more like "yeah this was really good, I liked it, etc" so ...

A quick lesson on the usage of apostrophes, possessive form, and plural nouns. When one uses an apostrophe, ie: "The cat's tail is long." it indicates ownership (aka possession). The ...

Hahaha what the hell man. sounds like a few of the kids at my school

Please fix the semicolon you have in your first paragraph. It is used to incorrectly that it scares me. Thank you.

This whole story didn't seem all that realistic. This seems more like a mafia world, not a drug world. Low-level coke and weed dealers know better than to shoot a ...

Actually, you should listen to me. If you split this in thirds, like I said ( thereby SHORTENING IT) you will get more reviews. I know that you can't put ...

If anyone could review this newer, edited version, that would be great. Lena

I actually tried to base this off of the song "Red Water," by Rehab. Initially, the plot was going to be the same main character, except his neighbor is the ...

Sorry for the overwhelming negativity of my review.

There are two proper uses for a semicolon. The first one is as a "supercomma." This is the more complicated of the two, and is less used. EXAMPLE: Rascal, the ...

What an interesting plot.