LemonyIce

Hey Dasia! This song was really good. I actually formed a tune in my head to go along with it and it sounds amazing. What I want to suggest to ...

Bro! This. Poem. I love it to pieces. Literally. It's amazing. The rhyme scheme, the flow, everything was just... Wow. But. I have a few Nitpicks. Very unpleasant, but I ...

Hey Isaac~ Your poem was a little dark. Though I'm sure you intended it to be that way, yes? Anyway, I have a few nitpicks: I love the night. It's ...

Hey Riker! So, your prologue was good, especially because it was being told from a griffin's point of view. There were a few things I would like to suggest to ...

Hey Gill! :D This chapter was just as good as the first two. I absolutely love the story till now. You've got a really great novel here. ;) I do ...

Hi Dweller! *likes* I really liked this poem. I kind of sympathize with the narrator. When I read the poem, I thought there's a deeper meaning to it. And I'm ...

Hey there South! :D Your story was really... different from what I usually read. Which is good, in a way. I liked reading it. It was dark and a little ...

'Ello Hamingway~ I'll start off right away. I loved your poem. I could totally relate to it. I do have a few critiques.(don't we always? *sigh*) Firstly, you need to ...

Ducky~ Ola! I am here to review~ Wheee~ So. I'm not going to go in any particular order. I'll just say each point as it comes to my mind. (Well. ...

Hey again Gill! :D This chapter was as good as the first one. I absolutely loved it, and the imagery that you used was great! I could imagine everything, especially ...

Hi mithrim! :D ...... Wow. That is all I can say. You've actually left me speechless. This poem is amazing. The way you've personified all these emotions is... Woah. I ...

Hey Gill! :D I really liked your story. FANTASY.

Muffins! :D So. Poem. It was really good, especially the repetition. It gave a good flow to the whole thing. But, at this part: Under the surface Of happiness and ...

Aku! :D :O Lykwoah. Your interpretation is totes better than mine. XD But, seriously, the way you've written it is just amazing! I absolutely love it! The way you've written ...

Mikster!