Lemons

Hi, I like your poem, but I think that it could benefit from one thing in particular. Don't explain things to your reader. For example, it seems that you nearly ...

Hi, I notice that a symptom many people on this site have is confusing being spot-on with descriptions with actual sophisticated use of language which would add ambiguity and flavor ...

Hi, It is good to use art for emotionally expressive purposes, but it is my contention that art should serve a higher purpose, so, if you want to perfect your ...

Hi, The first thing I noticed is that there seems to be a narratological disconnect between the first two stanzas and I don't think it was your intention to do ...