Lemikita

I shoved the feeling back so hard it tripped and fell. I absolutely love this sentence! Thanks so much for the imagery in this! :)

Cool! How do you have the time to write so much? How do you get all those ideas?? Oh wait, I know, you don't study medicine and you're talented, that's ...

I understand why you don't like the part of the story. I don't like writing stuff like this, with a lot of dialogue and nothing really going on. You want ...

Seeing as the spelling errors have already been found and corrected there isn't much for me to criticize anymore. I think you played wonderfully with the main character's guilt. You ...

I agree, continental continent is a bit redundant. But again, I am starting with the bad, which I shouldn't be. Intense is the word I connect with this poem. One ...

Hm... a novella... No, I don't think that would work with this piece. I like this short story/monologue/other though. Of course your style is great and the above comments are ...

I absolutely love this story. In the first chapter, when you described that knight in rusty armor I though that he would be your typical "son of a too proud ...

Enjoyed it, as usual. :) Powerful images, great style... I don't really have much to criticize here. The only thing I could mention is that to me the phrase "...the ...

Provoking! :) This is something that will attract any potential reader even more. At least I would want to read a story that starts like that. You may have given ...

General impression: Good! I like your style. Although you didn't use many words, I got an image of the speaker and the whole situation. What I really liked was the ...