Leja

lol, you're not even close ^_^ Though it's not entirely your fault. There's a missing link here that I kind of forgot to write. Hmm, I'll get around to fixing ...

Thank you both so much! Your comments are invaluable and I have to try really hard not to back and edit this very second, if only so that I can ...

Bella (>_>), Edward (^_^) or Jacob (=P) Haha, I love your smiley classifications! But yes, you're right, it's a book for the romantics XD

lyrical_sunshine, if anyone's too critical of Stephenie Meyer, it's me; don't worry about it XD I thought it was a big block away from the rest of the plot, which ...

What does everyone think of Jasper's story after reading Eclipse? Do you think it helps to explain his character?

*huggles Edward* I think the reason Edward seems like such a bad character is because of how he interacts with Bella and how she reports it. Thank you thank you ...

This book is the anti-romance if there ever was one :lol: But all the parallels are interesting to take a look at!

I love the title ^^ And I love things like the stars dribbling, beautiful word choice. Nice juxtaposition between sea and sky. There is nothing left to say but "good ...

I particularly like "drug" as well. Though there is the sense of smudging, as in pastels, I also intended smudging, as in incense . But as it is "our palms" ...

What's it about?

I remember really liking this story because it was the first thing I had ever read that showed me how a story could be something more than just a simple ...

If you're going for an effect of slow and plodding, word choice would be better. Overuse (and there is overuse here) of ellipses just make people angry. :wink:

I like the mellowing of the bright fields and butterflies ^_^ As to furthering the glory of grey, I almost want to say do more with the cat's actions in ...

I'm going to attempt to use green things throughout the other poems for references to nature, newness, and sickness. Dunno yet if it'll work, but I'll try ^_^ spun in ...

Oh, stop trying to take all the credit, Snoink :P