Leja

This made me laugh with the geriatric reference at the beginning. As for an actual critique? I don't know. It was rather short, so other than being humerous, it didn't ...

I like the pace here. The second- and third- to last stanzas were well done. I think you did a lovely job. And that is why this critique is so ...

Oh, me likes the indents :D [I think "played" and "punished" are in the same tense as "captured" and "lived", as past participles, where they're not solid preterite tense, but ...

*sigh* I do like that last line... but I'm looking at it again, and after all everyone has said... I think I am going to delete it. Thanks for your ...

*singsongs* I want to read EXTRAS... :D

I'll admit, if this wasn't my summer reading book this past summer, I would have put it down after about a quarter of the way through. It was decent, but ...

A special thanks to everyone who reviewed (and a normal thanks for anyone who just took the time to read all the way through) Mad, I'm not sure how much ...

But there is a tragic ending; the girl drowns at the end! Even though the waves were made specifically for the movie shoot, the danger was still real; even though ...

Thanks for your comments, everyone! I took out one or two "perfect"s but I'm going to leave the rest in because this kind of perfection should bother you :P

I know that Sumi already nominated it, but I'd just like to reiterate that My Sister's Keeper by Jodi Piccoult was a wonderful book, and should be included in this ...

This seemed like one long rant to me; I don't see where the end was developed any more than the beginning. If anything, I'd put the first two lines at ...

I'm sorry I don't have time to read the whole thing, but I wanted to drop by and let you know that I love the title. :D

Ohhhh *gets it now* Everything makes a little more sense, but I definately didn't get that the first time. Is there any way you could be a little more clear ...

Oh, good books => Bartleby the Scrivener by Herman Melville and The Yellow-Wallpaper by Charlotte Perkins Gibbon. And The Crucible by Arthur Miller if it's decided that plays will be ...

Religiously, I don't agree one bit with what you've written and I'm not sure I'll read the rest, but in this world of political correctness, I'll not hold it against ...