Leja

"As the last rays of sunlight penetrated the forest, a small white figure emerged out of nothing" I found this sentence to be a little awkward, almost as if too ...

I liked the tone of this work; I think tone is one of the most important thing to consider when writing because it is critical to understanding something. I especially ...

I like the idea of this poem, but I wonder if it addresses too many topics. You talk about connecting with other universes and other people, those parts I like, ...