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Re: Prosthesis #3 /P
Nice switch that Jon doesn't end up rescheduling his meeting. Hmm, I suppose this would make alot more sense had I read "Ch" (yeah, don't know how to spell it...) ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Prosthesis #2 /P
Oh dear, this is going to be a sad reveiw. I followed it up until the description of the being at the end, but when I read that it had ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Prosthesis Prologue /P
I did read this first, just didn't comment on it (just for the record :shrugs: ). The first paragraph sucked me in, and :sigh: I couldn't stop reading. No really, ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: The Seal of Falaurin
The continent of Falaurin once thrived with Vaachis, a race from across the Muorar Ocean, a benevolent people who enriched the culture of the native humans. Yet in their homeland ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Chionophobia #0.01
Oh dear God, my spleen died... Yeah, pretty much. I :cry: from laughter! :D
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Spirited 0.1
Deep down, like everything, beauty is mechanical. Good opening line; it made me pay attention, and not skip to another part. There is nothing spontaneous about it. It is easy ...
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: Just Another Girl
Oh boy, I know very little about critiquing lyrics... though I also know very little about poetry, but does that stop me? Huh? Hasn't yet! Now that I've disclaimed the ...
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: Fall from Grace
My favourite lines: escorted by questions because I like the way you used escorted, and No one knew the man, but now all stare at his shadow. because people are ...
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: Can anyone even try?
As its own line, the "The reason why we cry, we lie, we fight, we kill, we die" made me stop and think, wow, I really like that line, but ...
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: Warped Emotions
You knocked me down, and my tears blurred my vision so much that I'm still blind. Too many "my"s in one line? I'd suggest taking out the first one because ...
Apr 1, 2007 -
Re: A Free Verse Piece -
Mad, I really really liked the line, "Enraptured, they had been captured," because of the (internal rhyme, I think it is called?) relation between enraptured and captured. "Narcissism was the ...
Mar 31, 2007 -
Re: attempt at universality (you may now laugh)
The main reason I love this poem is because of all the reversals. Example: "prepared to throw kisses and knives to a maiden above. " It's something unexpected; my mind ...
Mar 30, 2007 -
Re: Animal Farm
I read this book for my freshman English class and totally loved it. Satire is totally up my alley, and even though some of it made me really sad, I ...
Mar 29, 2007 -
Re: Uglies
This series is near and dear to my heart. What I love most about it is that Scott Westerfeld doesn't appear to shove the story into one specific category: sci-fi, ...
Mar 29, 2007 -
Re: Language books?
Alright, this is probably not quite what you're looking for, but I'll share anyway: if you go to off of 's Wales page, there are audio and transcribed lessons for ...
Mar 29, 2007
