Leahweird

I really like how this poem uses very little to say a lot. You cab see a whole story it the few things the arrator says about himself, and the ...

Thank you very much! I will certainly take your suggestion into consideration. Don't wory, I can understand how it can be hard to give constructive criticsm without sounding harsh, especially ...

Points for knowing where the myth came from! I am on my way to edit. Thanks.

This sisn't make as much sense to me, because I haven't reas the novel. I am going to read it now. I really liked how you could tell that carl ...

Question, did you ever draw the pictures to go with this? It's very powerful, even jut the way it is. You seem to have a talent for deepm slightly distirbing ...

These are some of the best reveiws I've ever recieved. I'm going to overhaul this peice fairly soon, since you pointed out some glaring issues. Thankyou so much.

I just saw your sonnet, so when another of your peices popped up, I had to read it. You really have a gift for language. I'm jealous. I'm not sure ...

Wow, two poems about fear in close quaters. Both very well done I must add. I have very little to contribute beyond that, though.

I really liked this untill the second-last line. " for revenge for everything. This just didn't flow well, and everything else did. I'm not sure whats wrong with it, but ...

That means alot coming from a fellow vamp fan

I agree with LynnLynn for the most part. I want to add that your channeling InuYasha in your characters background and appearance. You should watch that, because if it's too ...

The second chapter explains all, but she's eighteen. Thankyou for pointing out the error. That line was missing on my origional draft, so now I can't remember what went there!