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Re: Story scribble
Hi I’m Leah! I really like this short it very accurately shows emotions you would most likely feel in this situation. Nitpicking though, the sentence, “But he didn’t answer her, ...
Aug 24, 2018 -
Re: Stopped in Time Chapter 1
Hi Jess! Thanks for your comments and corrections! I never really noticed those before. I%u2019ll be sure to check them out. I%u2019m going to publish chapter 2 as soon as ...
Aug 23, 2018 -
Re: The Long Stupid Trek through a Magic Forest. Chapter 1, Part 1: The Enchantress
Hi Lana! This is my first review so I hope I’m doing it right. I like the vibe I’m getting from Tes and the prince. It seems like the kind ...
Aug 23, 2018