Layleun

I think that when they make the movie that they'll have a lot to live up to. I mean seriously 700 some odd pages and all of them filled with ...

I loved it! You're a great writer by nine year old standards. Explaining the bubble people a bit more would be good. They were really cute (I hate the word ...

-break fast- One word -"Well?" Faron ask curios- Curious or curiously would work -"It's moving!" Quiry shouted exited- Excited -The egg exploided!- Exploded Ok well you are having A LOT ...

I see a lot of people write in first person and do well when writing like that and some people don't do as good. When writing in 1st it's always ...

Good idea. Tenses are a big issue here. If anything I would use past tense like was, walked, ran, etc. The intro below is the same thing just with all ...

Found a few typos, no biggie. #1:So wipe you eyes(you should be your) #2: thats (one apostrophe slipped) #3: So wipe you eyes (same mistake as #1 just different place.) ...