LaurynMitchell

Hey there! So, I really enjoyed this poem. You have a good concept and I got a strong mental image of a mother sewing clothes for her baby in a ...

I really enjoyed reading this. I like how you delved into what your character was thinking and feeling. I think it's hard to strike a balance between the speaker's thoughts ...

I really like the concept of this poem. How many poems do we have about fancy feasts and desserts and the like, while the leftovers are ignored? :P It does ...

This is a good start to what looks like a pretty good story. I do agree with what Tori pointed out, though. I really like how you characterized Victoria/Serena Taylor. ...

You were able to pack a lot of emotion into a relatively short piece. This is a very solid piece of writing. I really like where you say in the ...

This is a very interesting poem. I don't think you need a period at the end of the fourth line, though: Grain like sand paper itching on an edge . ...

This is a very nice, solid piece of writing. It left me wanting to know more about the characters and why they're dueling. As some others pointed out, you could ...

This is a good poem. I really like the rhythm and how smoothly it reads. I did have to read through it a couple of times before I felt like ...