Laurenh6

No worries! I thought I sent you a message but maybe it didn't get through :P ... Here's there link ! :).

Oo and I do like that crest :D

No worries! I didn't know that about the font - thanks for that xD - maybe I'll use it in da future. Have fun with all that school work ;)

Ok, thank you :)

Thank you for your feedback :) - really helpful . I'll make all the changes. I think I'm struggling a bit with adding more of personality into the story , ...

Thanks so much for the review - exactly what I needed! I'll make the changes you suggested :) - thanks !

Alright, thanks . In regards to your second critique - that's kinda the point xD .. You're not supposed to understand straight away, I'm revealing it as I go along ...

No problemoOo :D

Hahah xD , thanks a lot ! Yeah sci -fi sounds good! I'll give it a shot! :)

Thank you very much for the review! I really appreciate it, and I'm glad you liked it :) . I'd love to read more from you too so notify me ...

No worries :D

Wow thanks so much for this review - it really means a lot that you like it :) - thank you ! :D

Wow thanks so much for this review - it really means a lot that you like it :) - thank you ! :D

No I didn't feel like it was an info dump, I thought it was good how it was :) ! And no worries !

Also , it's not a short story - it's just a chapter :)