Lauren2010

O.o I agre with Tayla, this is very long for one post. Smaller peices (maybe only one or two chapters) encourage people to read and review, and it's also a ...

Hey there. First off, this was an interesting story. Your ability to describe a setting is very good and I was able to picture everything quite well. Now on to ...

Hello liambt! Welcome to the Young Writers Society! Here at YWS, we have a general rule that you should review at least 2 peices written by other people before you ...

Hey there, I'm Lauren and I'll be your reviewer for today :D First off, as a general rule here on YWS you need to review two peices of someone elses ...

Hello, TeamJake. I'm Lauren and I will be your reviewer today =) I'll start off with grammer ...there were only a few things “Nothing,” I sighed. “Everything’s just very.... chaotic ...

Hey there, just so you know here on YWS we try to keep a 2:1 ratio, which means that you should review two stories/poems before posting anything of your own ...

Hey there, interesting story. Is this the first chapter? Or just a piece or a prologue? It was kind of short if it was to be a first chapter, so ...

Hah wow I enjoyed this. I liked Amora's interesting thought process. And I absolutely loved Bob the vampire. I started laughing as I read that and if anyone was home ...

Hey there! I'll be reviewing for you today! :) Well lets handle some nit picky stuff first: " M y boys, my bo ys how do you fare?" The first ...

Seems like most of the nit pick stuff has been taken care of. I just wanted to say that this is epic and wonderful. I love reading random stuff like ...

Hey there. I also really liked this. It had a good feeling to it, a very non poetic feel. Not that I'm against anything poetic, this is just different and ...

Hey there, I'm going to give you my short and sweet review minus the grammer stuff, because grammer isn't my thing. =) Anyways, it was an interesting concept but I ...

Interesting. It's short, but like the Lauren above said it's not bad since it seems like you will have rotating narrators. I like the tone of Regan, it makes your ...

BE ORIGINAL! Fanfics are alright, but can be limited to the basis of what it is a fanfic of. People could get mad if "things wouldn't be that way." Also, ...

Everything seems to be said but I just wanted to say I absolutely positively love the style of this story. It's different and refreshing and was fun to read. I ...