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Hey there Cathy! This sounds like a prologue, is it? It's pretty good for a prologue, with length and content and such. It gives some info immediately important to the ...

Hey there! I really enjoyed this. The description was nice, and I loved the beach setting. :) This is almost poetic, really, which I enjoy. I could not rest, but ...

I can't believe it's over! *tear* I liked this chapter! Endings are always bittersweet, but there's a certain satisfaction in seeing things all tied up. I love that Scott wasn't ...

Hey there! Yay for more Shifters! :D I liked this chapter. Even though I'm not a fan of Ben, I like the interaction between him and Crys. It's amusing. Anyways, ...

Hey Tanya! Ah, the short story. I personally find it more grieving than a novel to write. You've done a pretty good job, too! I loved the twist, and the ...

Heya MVP! I'm here as requested! Now onto the review! Dialogue First off, I'd like to direct you to this article here: Dialogue Punctuation . It's by a YWSer and ...

Hey Maddy! Here as requested! :D Let's get through the nitpicks first: That would be right: make me part owl, give me perfect night vision and feathers to keep me ...

So sorry for the delay, Attolia! I've been vacationing. Another lovely chapter! Adele is such an intruiging character, it's fun to read about her and I can't wait to see ...

Yay for another chapter! :) “Well, yes, he brought you back, but- ” Sinclair was squirming on his chair. Sinclair is a man of power, and especially so since the ...

Hey! So sorry for the delay! I've been vacationing. :) He winked at me and had I had any saliva, I would have stuck my tongue out at him. I'm ...

Hey Shepherd! Again, I really enjoy your style. The writing is clear, yet sophisticated and detailed enough to keep the reader engaged without being overbearing. It's great, even if it ...

Hey There! I know exactly what you mean about the conflicting emotions. I'm the same way with the novel I'm writing, though I'm hardly even halfway through it. But there ...

Hey LastPaladin! This was really quite interesting. I'm intruiged by the plot, and the characters as well. I like the style, even if it can be a bit heavy at ...

Hey there! I'm Lauren, and I'm here to review! This was really interesting! I like the concept, and it's very well written. I especially like the conflict between the two ...

Hello there! Well this was quite interesting! I love the concept, and the writing is pretty well too. Though, it could use a bit of work to really make it ...