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Hiya Polinka! Back again to review! I adore Katrina already. She's exactly the kind of character these two need in their journey/lives. I also really like how you described love ...

Hey Polinka! Here again for another review! I really liked this chapter! I enjoy how Delem and Felix interact with each other. I also really really like the suspenseful ending ...

Hi Polinka! Here again for another review! It seems I've reviewed some of these out of order, and I apologize! I'll catch up and make sure they all get a ...

Hi Polinka! Here as requested! Sorry it's taken me so long to get to reviewing your new chapters, I've been busy, but I promise I'm on it now! I really ...

Hi Mia! Here as requested! :) Nitpicks “Are you sure they won’t mind?” Felicia’s sugary maple syrup voice fell on my ears just like a feather scuds in the hollow ...

Hey Polinka! Back again! It's good to see Delem again! I really like that this chapter included more about the spirits, but I'm still wondering what exactly is up with ...

Hiya Polinka! Back again for another review! First off, I really admire attempting such a unique format for this chapter. It's very well done, and super interesting. However, I don't ...

Hey polinka! Here again, as requested! I really, really enjoyed this chapter. The voice of Felix is so natural and believable, it kept me interested and entertained throughout the chapter. ...

Hey Polinka! Here to review as requested! ^^ Sorry for taking so long, life's been busy! First, some nit-picks: I honestly thought I was doing the right thing. It’s easier ...

Hi Suz! Here as requested :) You have no idea how pumped I am that you're posting your writing again. So excited! And dragons are pretty freakin' awesome too. ^^ ...

Hiya peanut! Here as requested! Now I haven't read what came before this (I skimmed it lightly to sort of familiarize myself with it), but everyone seems to have been ...

Hey kendal! Here as requested! This is a really sweet poem! I particularly like the imagery in the second stanza, and in several places you rhyme so well it makes ...

Hiya Jas! Here at last! I really enjoyed this chapter. Ah, the more I read the more I love this story. Anyways, I don't have many nitpicks in this chapter ...

hey Jas! Here again for another review! I really enjoyed this chapter! It was so sad, and really makes me feel for Tyler though part of me still feels like ...

Hey Jas! I really enjoyed this as its own piece, it's a lovely metaphor that I'm assuming involves Nina (who is described as stick thin and corpse-like) and an eating ...