Lauren

Hello! You've written such an endearing little tale, CastlesInTheSky; I did worry it might be one of those soppy "Wait for me! Hold me close, oh my love" stories that ...

Hi, Merry_Haven. If you're interested in the Regency period, then may I recommend a charming book, Rosetta by Barbara Ewing. It's set in England and then Egypt. Doesn't fit the ...

Hello, denj. Nice to meet you, and welcome to YWS. I'm afraid, being chronically lazy, I didn't read your entire document, but the first chapter. Regrettably, I'm sure that will ...

Hello! I'm glad I read this - it was exceedingly enjoyable, so thank you for that. It was a tad cliché, as Alice pointed out, but nonetheless, it was cute, ...

Ha, I liked this. 8) At first I thought it was meant to be all serious, but now I know it's a funny take on the fairy tales. Um, it ...

I thought it was good - flowed well, loved the part: As I read the sign, I’m no longer confused: Jesus of Nazareth The King of the Jews. It sounded ...

The nit-picks are done, so this'll just be a little review. I was going to crit merely as a thank-you in return for yours, but when I read it, I ...

It's on my bookshelf, alogn with many classics I've yet to read. It looks a little too long for me ... I probably would have read it a year or ...

Hello. No nit-picks from me (partly due to laziness, but it seems others have already done the deed) - I'll just give you an over-all. I thought the opening was ...

Very good! Hi by the way. I was a bit sceptical at first - I see many of these 'in the eyes of a stalker/serial killer/creep' things, but I think ...

There are a lot of basically unheard-of authors that somehow managed to fall under my radar as a twelve-year-old-ish. One was Anne Cassidy. At one time, I had all her ...

Hi. First thing that struck me was that it's really short for a chapter. Can it be longer next time? Another thing is that you chose to right the present ...

Bitterly real. I liked it. My only issues are with the pacing. You said you wrote it in more or less twenty minutes and, forgive me, it shows. I would ...

Hi! I thought this was great! It had all the right amosphere and dialogue for a gripping historical tale. I, like listeningforthemuse, found myself wondering what had happened to bring ...

Hi there! Now, before I get onto the main things, I'm wondering what age group you're aiming this at. Because that allows different things. For example, this is clearly a ...