LanaO

This is very good, it tells a story perfectly. The lyrics aren't complex but still do its job and that's brilliant. I like the rhythm too, you have a flow ...

This is well written.

This is a beautiful poem. It makes the reader involuntarily answer the questions and it evokes emotion. Yeah, I really this. very very good.

I love this, "blue artery connection", is my favourite line. It's simple but says a lot and that's one of the best traits a poem can have. Brilliant x