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Even though this is your first poem, it is a very beautiful poem. I love the sombre and nostalgic tone of this poem and it really makes the reader think ...

I really do love this poem. It is very well written but not because of grammar but because of its individuality and the descriptive language you use throughout this. It ...

I love the wit in this and the unique lay out. It's a comedic poem yet very understandable and I love the way you displayed it and wrote it too. ...

This is very good. The descriptive language stops it from becoming boring. It pulls the reader in more and more which is veryy good!! I'm excited for more to come