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I liked this a lot! I thought it was really clever and funny. I'm just dropping b to leave a comment really because there isn't anything I can think of ...

This was an interesting little story. :) If I were you, I'd try and make the structure a bit easier to understand. Make it so that whenever someone new is ...

Hey ultraviolet :) Thanks for reviewing my story, Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes. I really appreciate the reviews I get! I agree with the last reviewer; this was dark. Mind ...

Hey! :) Thanks for reviewing my piece, Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes. I really appreciate all of my reviews! Sorry this isn't going to be a proper review! Anything that ...

Hey Nike! Thanks for reviewing my story, Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes. I'm giving you a review as requested and to say thank you for my review. :) I disagree ...

Hey punkrockchick! You reviewed my writing, Love, Demise and Last Goodbyes, so I thought I'd review something of yours. :) Any nit-picks that I would suggest have already been suggested ...

Hey :) This is more of a comment than a review really. I have to say, I really liked this! It was short but I definitely think that it was ...

Heya :) This was really great and seriously funny! I love how you've combined all of the different things without making it feel crowded. Well done. :wink: BELLA: Oo… shiny! ...

This was an effective and emotional piece of writing. Well done! :D I'm no good with grammar so I'm not going to comment on that, I'll probably be wrong anyway! ...

Hey Megan x I really like this actually! I especially liked the idea of the poem. It was quite clever and original. I agree with what everyone else has said ...

I loved this! I agree that I don't really know what this poem is about but whatever it's about, it's seriously good! You have beautifully written this poem and it's ...