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Lajnsuik

  • Poetry » General, Literature Re: Field at Night

    How amazing! So so nice and the language that you used is so so amazing! It almost has a calming effect,love the imagery and everything. I would love to see ...

    Apr 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Love Has Driven Me!

    Hey! Just a review: Beautiful ..what else is there to say? The use of language and how it flowed in some places was well thought through. I will not pick ...

    Apr 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: bathing suit

    Interesting poem Not in a bad way, to put lightly I like this idea,I would love to see a second part to this or you making it into a little ...

    Apr 9, 2015


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