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Re: Dear Stupid Blank Page
That's sooooo funny!!! I read it aloud to my sister, and she almost fell off of her chair laughing. You better be careful with those poems, they could cause some ...
May 9, 2015 -
Re: Night Bird's Song
So nice! The way you described it was perfect! I really like everything you did in the poem. The one thing I noticed was all of the commas. I would ...
May 8, 2015 -
Re: still (s)he lies
It's really good. I've never experienced love, yet this made me feel like I was experiencing it. I'm really confusing I know, but this was extravagant. You really outdid yourself. ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: The Lady and the Lady's Song
So nice! Since I play guitar, have you thought of making this into a song? It would be very beautiful. I think that even if you don't play an instrument, ...
May 6, 2015 -
Re: No Honor in Blood
This was so beautiful. *Wipes away tear* I enjoyed this so much too. Please let me know when you create more. I've been working on my poems, but none of ...
May 6, 2015 -
Re: For My Family I Would Be -edited
This was very nice. I'm homeschooled so I can't say that I know what you feel. When I read this poem I felt your emotional response to this. The rhyming ...
May 6, 2015 -
Re: Try To Fly
That's so mean! I think I understand what your trying to say in this story though. When someone bullies another person, it hurts so bad. This man cuts the dragon's ...
May 6, 2015