Ladyinpurple597

I liked it a lot. It was very heartfelt and original. At least, I never heard of a song with lyrics like that so that was really good, in my ...

I'm sorry but I don't like it. I don't know, it's just....not right. But that's just me.

I agree Solvalery. I think that you should make the stanzas and verses shorter and more spread out so it is easier to read. I loved the poem, anyway. Keep ...

Thanks for taking the time to review and give me suggestions. I really appreciate all of your feedback.