Lady_Ariani

Okay, tenses changed. Will work on it more after the Easter break!

*laughs* Thanks for that guys! Also when you said Alice, I thought for sure this was a connection to the vampire tale Twilight book Smile is it? No, not at ...

Okay, I'm not looking at anyone else s reviews, because that'll throw me off and I'll think my review is small in comparison! And we wouldn't want that now, would ...

Thanks a lot for that, Music Lover! I don't know why I have such problems with tense. Perhaps I'm just not used to writing past tense, as opposed to present ...

thank you all for your wonderful reviews! They've really helped me a lot, not to mention put a few things into perspective for me! I now have this revised intro ...

Thank you both for your reviews! I feel much more confident in showing my writing now *grins* I am currently working on expanding just why the Blue Pole is so ...