LadySpark

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Now I kind of understand where you're coming from, but I'm still not sure I agree with it being the best way to showcase it. You've got so much going ...

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soooo yws didn't notify me you'd replied, but thank you darling. I'll work on all the stuff you said and edit heavily. I appreciate it much

soooo yws didn't notify me you'd replied, but thank you darling. I'll work on all the stuff you said and edit heavily. I appreciate it much

Thank you darling. And seriously, thank you for the review.

I probs didn't make myself clear, I meant it's not supposed to be a true representation because it's biased. A true representation would be scientific facts and absolutely no human ...

Considering that I've been suffering from depression/panic attacks/an eating disorder since I was 12, it's very safe to say that I was not trying to trivialize depression. The breakthrough at ...

I'm afraid being a grammar nazi doesn't really have a place while critiquing poetry! Capitalization/punctuation is something that is really up to writer of the poem. There's really no need ...

then what's the point of the poem at all, if you're not trying to make a reader feel or think?

I'm pretty sure you're meant to write children's stories. (I will review this later I promise).

YAS THANK YOU I LOVE YOU

opps it was supposed to be 'spring rain that fell' simply because it flowed better, but apparently the 'that' got put in the wrong spot. As for the vessels thing, ...