LadySpark

Ahhhhhh thank you thank you!!! This is so helpful!! Also, this is the first prose I've written since 2014, so it's not surprising you've only ever read my poetry lol

Thank you for catching that typo, you're correct!

You are the best!!! Thank you so much for your insight!!!

Thank you so much!

text version: i fell in love with you under a star crusted sky. hazy, lazy summer nights that felt long but flashed past lightning reflecting off neon lights in a ...

this is such a lovely review. Thank you so much!!!

Text Version: i write pages and pages - all about the poetry i see strung out between your stars when they catch the beam cast out of my lighthouse (searching, ...

sweetheart this is excellent. nice work - this is a level up. i can tell you had some type of breakthrough with your poetic voice and it SINGS.

This was cute! I enjoyed the realism and simplicity of it. It kind of reminds me of a where the sidewalk ends poem. You really put me in the shoes ...

love this!!! especially about the narrator being a lost puppy. was not intentional but i lovvveee that analysis!! thank you!

thanks for the review, friend!!!

Thank you thank you thank you!

Spending the last twelve years recovering from an eating disorder has been one of the hardest challenges of my life. Unlearning the maladaptive mechanisms I used to view the world ...

Good point on the gods critique! That line has also been niggling at me. Thanks for your review and kind words!

this is probably my april madness submission, so give me all you've got xoxoxo