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LadySpark

the way you move your feet when you're trying to go nowhere is a very telling thing

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Aldenora: Dust (Chapter 1)

    Hi! I'm going to try to review this before I go to church in 20 minutes, so lets see how far we get. I'm Drama, and thank you for asking ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tristesse

    Hello! Here as requested. :) Hope I do a good job. :P Ivory keys, sing to me - sweet thoughts a melodious motion. beautiful opening. Just exquisiteness. Crescendo heights, a ...

    Aug 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Not Forever

    hi Sloth! :) praying to God that He allows me to love you tomorrow as well. This is kind of repeating the first to lines. Don't you think? I don't ...

    Aug 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Where angels often tread... (working title)

    Greetings! I'm here to review you, so buckle up! So, you have trouble with grammar and punctuation? I'll go extra hard on you in that department ;) *strokes beard* okay. ...

    Aug 17, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P

    Hi Marco! This is the last Part I have to review... :D YEA. Are you proud of me? I am!!!! :) after this I'm making a club for Amore, then ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P --part2

    Hi Marco! I'm getting closer to having everything in this novel reviewed! EKK I'm so proud of myself. Mum answered and said that I was too young to start learning ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P--part 3

    Hi Marco! :) Here to review! :) SO ARE YOU READY FOR THIS AWESOMENESS? Xedo , our owl. You need to add something, so the reader knows its an owl. ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P--part 4

    Hi Marco! Reviewing Chapter 4! I'm excited! I haven't reviewed in a long time. :) U ncle George and A unt Angelina, :) We always knew it would happen... “Oh, ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P--part 5

    Hi! here to review chapter 5!!! :) I love that picture btw. Very Potterish. lol. My first day at school! It was great! If an ordinary muggle school is great ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P-- part 6

    Hi Marco! I need to get back all my points, so I'm going to review you!! :) ALL YOUR CHAPTERS! I’ve just woken up and it’s almost supper time. When ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Has Been Deleted

    :D Hi! I'm here to review! lets get started! I have chosen to take the right path, Live life with fewer mistakes committed, Avoid doing most obvious wrong things, But ...

    Aug 10, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: City Of Love | Chapter 1

    hi! I'm here to review!!! “Are your bags packed?” Oh. God. you need to make this part one line. My bags! I forgot! “Uh-Uh..” I lie. “Hah hey Chad , ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: Meeting of Romeo and Juliet

    Hi you! Here to review you!!! :) wassup? I'm drama btw. The house is a flutter of movement and excited whispers. Though tension from this days brawl still simmers below ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Fauxwinds Chapter Three

    hi! I'm drama and I'm here to review! I haven't seen you around. So, lets get started!!!!!! The bird of Hermes is your name, eating your wings to make you ...

    Jul 31, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Troubled Sage and Sweet Caroline 0.3

    Hi! Here to review you for review day!!!! Hope you like it. And if you do, LIKE IT!!!! :) I haven't seen you around. Well, I'm drama, nice to meet ...

    Jul 31, 2011


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