LadyShadows

I will miss you uncle Steve :'(

It's alright, myjaspercat. Like said,I didn't mean to make it sound rude. After all it is typing rather than spoken words so there is no way of knowing how that ...

Besides, it kind of doesn't help with how it seemed rude, as I typed it rather than spoke it. But like said, I felt attacked. That's it.

Sorry, I wasn't trying to be rude, I just felt a little attacked because of the story was based off of my emotions. That's all.

Thanks, I needed that actually. :)

Besides, I did better works than that. Of course it's shit. I only came up with it today and it was all I could think of.

I don't care whether or not the piece was liked. I did it because I was sad. That's it.

Beautiful. That's all I can say. I'd love to review but this is too wonderful. :) Good job!

For the magick part I put a footnote to explain that so it doesn't happen again! :P

Lol she wasn't emo, she was gothic. It's alright, I will pass that off because sometimes that happens. xP Yes, it was vague, and I can vouch for that. But ...

One, with the black words from girls and such, that was metaphorical. It was supposed to be like that. And yes, there IS a K in magic. Magic, with a ...

It's fine. I apologize for taking it the wrong way.

And I looked it up on a page or two. I was just quoting it.

All I am saying here, you have corrected me as I don't know everything. Please don't be rude.

Well as I looked into this a bit more, you may be right. But what I found out grammar in poetry depends on the beat, the meter, and the rhythm ...