LadyPurple

I didn't honestly read this... But I did find a few nitpicks I wanted to bring to attention. “To o scared to look?” "too" means another person feels the same ...

“I woke up late,” she muttered, climbing in. “I didn’t get to do my hair, or my make-up and worst of all, freaking Reece was hogging the bathroom on purpose.” ...

Red -Needs capitalization Blue -Puncuation Purple -Spelling The blazing sun rays hit my face. It was the last day of May and tomorrow my freedom was going to start. I ...

Change is about choices. Influence comes from ideas. Purpose brings progress. When faced with a problem one can choose to overcome it. One can give ideas to solve the problem. ...

First off, I haven't reviewed in, like ever, so I'm a bit rusty. Card was right about the "I"s. So I think I'll just ignore the "I"s and hopefully you'll ...

:o I take this retaliation as an act of war! Haha I'm kidding unless it's war you want ;) anyway, I liked this. Along with clicking the like button. Good ...

Chapter 2 Opal "But, Opal... , " said Violet, "Isn't that illegal?! She can't do that ...can she?" Violet is my best friend. She has blond hair , very pale ...

Prologue (not in opal's view) Some people don't really know where she came from. Some people thought she was from an island in the Pacific Ocean and managed to get ...

The doctor says, I have an infection, that I 'm taken over by affection, for you. I can't imagine my life without you, everyday I hope to meet you, I ...

I didn't know whether to out this in historical, fantasy or romance, but I settled for romance. It's set in a world like ours but the Romans haven't invaded Britain ...

This is just the beginning of something I'm working on. I haven't properly committed to it yet but I do have an idea of where it is going in my ...

"HI!!!! so i was in the mood of writing something comical and so i heard about the half conflict and half comedy on vampires verses wizards. here i am writing ...

People say you have to look a certain way to fit in, The only problem with that is, I never asked for your opinion :) Cut little ryhme... But reaaaaally ...

I know who and what I am and very proud of it. That guy didn't effect me. The guy bashing women will be shot within a year anyway. So what ...

Avatar: The last air bender Prologue: Water. Earth. Fire. Air. My grandmother used to tell me stories about the old days, a time of peace when the Avatar kept balance ...