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Re: Williwaw Chapter 24
Ze Lady of Mystery here to review! Another chapter another review! First Impressions Ooh boy we've got a trouble boiling in this chapter. Always fun! For us, certaily not for ...
Jun 3, 2024 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 23
Ze Lady of Mystery here to review! Another chapter another review! First Impressions I liked this chapter quite a bit, I'm starting to get into the story more now and ...
Jun 2, 2024 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 22
Ze Lady of Mystery here to review! I saw you put out more chapters, so im hoping I can work my way up to those this month! I'm hoping to ...
Jun 1, 2024 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 21
Ze Lady of Mystery here to review! First Impressions I like how you start with this line "Atheron was intimidating" and then go one to tell us why it's intimidating. ...
May 23, 2024 -
Re: Williwaw Chapter 20
Ze Lady of Mystery here to review! It's been a moment so my apologies, I'm a bit rusty. I figured I'd start from here. Since your first 20 or so ...
May 23, 2024 -
Re: The Daughter of War- Chapter 4: The Daughter of Spring
Ze Lady Off Mystery is back for another review! I'll start with some general story stuff. Sprinkle some Grammar in and whatnot. Again, I like the way you describe stuff. ...
Dec 22, 2023 -
Re: The Daughter of War- Chapter 3: Ares
Ze Lady Of Mystery is here to review! I'm a sucker for Greek mythology so I was drawn to this so fast in the green room!! I'll start with some ...
Dec 16, 2023 -
Re: Chapter 5 Upgrades part 1 of 2
Ze Lady of Mystery is here to review! I love this concept and your writing style! Almost reminds me of Clive Cussler's books. While I seem to be thrown into ...
Dec 9, 2023 -
Re: I Knew Chapter 1
Ze Lady of Mystery is here! For starts wow that was a great hook! Had me immediately wanting to know the history between these characters. And the action, and scene ...
Dec 9, 2023 -
Re: Robin Hood & The Silver Pistol
HI here is my promised review Myth 🙂 I’ve already read the first bit of this, and corrected and review accordingly. So i’ll skip that first bit for now. First ...
Nov 1, 2022 -
Re: Finders, keepers; losers, weepers.
Hi, Lady Here with a review! Wow right off the bat I love this so much. It really feels full of emotion and reading it, well I don't want to ...
May 20, 2021 -
Re: The Civil War - Prologue: The Beginning of the End
Hello! Lady here with a review! I must say I love your writing style. Everything looks very clean and easy to read. As far as I can tell this chapter ...
May 16, 2021 -
Re: Prophecy of Thieves [chapter 6]
Hello, Lady Here to review this awesome chapter! wow, I don't know how anyone has not liked this or reviewed this yet it is so well written, wow. I very ...
Feb 12, 2021 -
Re: .
Hi, Stellar! Lady here! quickly before we get into the review. when I read this it inspired me to start playing the Zelda game we have(twilight princess). Anyway onto the ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: We Have To Stop Meeting Like This (When We Ruled The Waves Chapter 2)
Hello! Lady here with a review! OOh pirates I love pirates!! and anything sea related but especially ships and pirates. Right enough of me ranting on. to the review! I ...
Jan 31, 2021