LadyMysterio

Okay here again for the second chapter! I realize you said to skip reviewing the first if reading the second... whoops. Anyway! This is a fantastic opening line, i love ...

Hello! A fellow team egg here to review this lovely chapter. I am missing some context due to coming into this at chapter ten, as such, I appreciate the little ...

LadyM Here with a review again! I’m thrilled to see this continued! I Love the energy of these kids, they feel like kids! This also reminds me a lot of ...

Hello, LadyM here with a review! I like your opening paragraph, it introduces us to the situation and environment, and gives us some stakes too. [b/]“Between the dark smog that ...

Hey its LadyM here for a review! This is a fantastic first impression of this story for me hehe “Sera was about to pass out from butter-sugar-flour-chocolate overload when Kali ...

Hi cherie! LadyM Here with a review. Now bear in mind I don't write poetry, so all i can really offer is how I interpreted it and such. My first ...

Hello! It’s LadyM here with a review : D I really like this introduction! It feels like some of the older books I've read and gives me a nice sense ...

Hello its LadyM, again. I love me some space stuff 1) What's your initial reaction to the chapter? Finn's enthusiasm is making me laugh. I haven't really read a character ...

Hello! LadyM here with her long awaited review… How do you feel about the descriptions? Could you follow what was going on? Did you at any point feel lost because ...

Hello ze lady of mystery here! First off, I love this opening line! It hooked me back when I this was first posted. The King’s hand sent piles of snow ...

Yay chapter three!! Ohoh and another swan that would be cool to draw! Solea couldn’t mistake the White Swan if she tried. Even in his human form, the large bloodstain ...

Hi snoink! I’m here for chapter two! Starting off with a nice setting of our scene! WOWZA is this ever an epic party @_@ Draperies like wispy clouds adorned the ...

Hello there Snoink! Time for me to return the favor of beta reading/reviewing.! Lets see what this first chapter is all about! Solea’s hands were bleeding. Again. My goodness, that's ...

Hello there, I am here to give you a review! (obviously) I always love it when a writer sets the scene at the start of a chapter! So this was ...

Ze Lady of Mystery here to review! Another chapter another review! First Impressions OOOh some more info on Gwyn and Malcom, nice. Obviously if I started from the beginning I'd ...