LadyEvvy

Plans? Evil smiles? Now I'm really curious... Lukewarm chocolate is much easier to drink than hot chocolate. I, too, shall be needing glue and newspapers! I have plot joles I ...

Accidental jokes are the best kind. So they do get a client! Chi doesn't really know how much she'll be paid yet, does she? Wonder what Claret's part in the ...

I don't really think about my characters' futures beyond their stories either. If I did I'd never stop writing them, and the story would just go on as long as ...

I'm pretty sure that even in the distant future, kids will not pay attention in class. Chris's parents paid for pricey private schools, though, so he stays focused. Greg is ...

Thanks for the review! I can see that info dump now, and that sentence. I'll be sure to correct those when I go back over this. I'm glad the title ...

Thanks! I actually don't know where the idea came from. I probably took it from somewhere without realizing it. I'm glad you like it, though! I don't know where I'm ...

I see. I suppose that's a better idea. I don't think I have the guts to self-publish anything, so good for you! I'll try to keep up the feedback! Keep ...

I do feel very special, thank you! :) I tend to read first person as though the character is female as well. I don't think I ever really mentioned the ...

Hey! Thanks for the review. It's fine, you can't really control technical issues. Is that why you haven't updated your story much lately? I meant to include something about how ...

Thank you very much for the review! This was a lot of very helpful commentary. The repeated lines, in both cases, were sort of put there for emphasis, but I ...

Thank you for your comments! I really appreciate them! I know I really need to get into questions like those, but I don't quite know where to put them without ...

I'm going to try writing two stories at once. I don't know if it'll work, but I have multiple ideas and I don't want to lose any! Don't spoil anything! ...

I have a lot of free time as well, but I'm lazy, and most of the time I don't have the motivation to write. I'm trying to fix that, though.

Bartimaeus is hard to beat. I kind of noticed his personality shining through in Claret, just a little. I agree, hyphens were impossible for me. It took numerous google searches ...

Yup, I'd have just stared at the mirror, too. Margaret is not me, though, so she get some wits. I know what the key will unlock, I'm just not sure ...