LadyClay

Thank you I will try to re work on it :) thanks for the compliment it really cheers me up !

Thank you for your criticism I was looking forward to an answer like yours in order for me to improve my writing. I will work on the parts you showed ...

Thank you for your comment, I'm very glad you liked it ! Thanks for the correcting part also, and I meant " Where being loveD doesn't matter" haha I'm gonna ...

Thank you very much ! :)

Thanks a lot for the correcting part, and your comment really mean a lot to me, thanks for reading!