LadyBug

Thank you for the review!

Lol

Hello, I'm Jade and I'll be giving my honest opinion on this today. I saw it in the Green Room, read it, and thought it deserved a review. WHAT I ...

Also, Lottie'd was supposed to be a Lottie had contraction XD I didn't want to write Lottie had had so I made up Lottie'd XD

Also, Lottie'd was supposed to be a Lottie had contraction

I'm glad you like it! I'll tag you when part three comes out! Thanks for pointing out spelling mistakes. I'll be on top of my game next time, I swear ...

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YOU WROTE THIS IN FIFTEEN MINUTES! That's awesome!

Thank you for the review! I'll be sure to keep punctuation consistent in the future

Thank you so much for the welcome and review. I'll be sure to edit this with your suggestions! I can tag you when it's finished if you'd like?

I'm glad you like it! Thanks for the review :) I'll check for grammar mistakes.

It won't fix.... It's stuck like that now I guess

And I didn't realize chapter eight was small XD thanks for letting me know. That was embarrassing

Thank you for the review! I'll be sure to add more emotion to Hannah in part three!

Thank you for the review! I'll be sure to add more detail in the future and I'm glad you're excited for part three. SPOILER ALERT: Huge rooftop chase coming up! ...