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Re: Fairy Diary | Day 5
Hey lozah, Hannah here to nitpick the series you wrote at 11 years old. I have a lot to do, but you know I made time to read my favorite ...
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Re: Maisie & Mallory’s demise
Hello Vampire! Jade here to review your story! I've been over a lot of your stories in more detail, so this review will be short and more generalized. I saw ...
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Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 53
Hi Felistia! Jade here to leave you a review on your chapter! With no more further ado, let's begin. To begin, I really liked the dialogue in this chapter, it's ...
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Re: Fairy Diary | Day 4
Bonjour my moist one, Jade here to review the best thing on YWS. With no further ado, let's start Bonjour! Ooo... I like that new greeting better than "Hi Diary.". ...
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Re: Fairy Diary | Day 3
Hey girlboss, it's your least favorite gemstone here to review my favorite series on yws. Fairy Diaries is my sole reason for getting up in the morning, and I've just ...
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Re: The Father:Part Two
Hi Vampire! Jade here to give you another review on your work! This one will be short, I promise. I love seeing the development in your stories. Watching your writing ...
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Re: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 52
Hi Felistia, Jade here to give you a short review on your work. To begin, one thing I love is the names you chose for every character, they fit your ...
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Re: The adventures of Poppy McLain-One
Hi Vampire! Jade here to help get your work out of the green room! I've given you a lot of specific advice in the past, so this review will just ...
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Re: Conquest of Shadows - Flames with In - Chapter 4
Hi Flaming Phoenix, Jade here to give you a review! I've seen your novel everywhere, but I don't think I've read or reviewed any, so I'm jumping in blind. However, ...
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Re: untitled
Hi! Jade here to review your story! Let me just start by saying wow, we respect women's wrongs here, and women support women. This story was so good. It was ...
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Re: Rosalie’s story-The babysitter of Loraine
Hello, again..... Jade here to review another work of yours. I want to clear out the Green Room and focus on some stories with less attention, and I enjoy your ...
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Re: Heather and Loraine have splendid fun!
Hi again! Jade here to leave you a review on your story! To begin, I won’t bring back anything I mentioned in a previous review about format or prose; I ...
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Re: Bittersweet Nightshade: Chapter 1 Part 2
Hi MissGangamash, Jade here to give you a review! I saw your piece didn't have any, so I decided to go ahead and drop one. Let me get started. I ...
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Re: Michael’s story
Hi Vampire! Jade here to give you a review. I saw in the green room that you didn't have any, and I wanted to stop by. That aside, let me ...
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Re: Fairy Diary | Day 2
Hi Klibby, it's Jadehere to review your lovely work, Fairy Diary! Even though I have a million assignments due, you know I love competition, and I want to get my ...
Sep 3, 2022
