LadyBug

This poem flows. I like how you made it short and sweet. It was light and funny though I wish it had just a smudge more detail and more of ...

This captured my emotions. The fact people would walk all over you, forget you, and hurt you hurt me as well. When you still had hope at the end that ...

That's true. People think anger is raging, screaming, punching something, or something along the lines of that. This shows that anger is expressed in many different ways, some of which ...

I would show it to my parents and explain what happened. I know it's easier said than done but it's the right (and in the long run, it is the ...

I love how deep and descriptive this is. At first I thought it was a bit slow and I was about to give up on it but the paragraph, "I ...

I liked how the two characters had different personalities. Sometimes when I read books every character sounds the same. The boy and Raven both had their own unique voices. The ...