Lacy

I like this! It has a perfect balance of both humor and seriousness and is entertaining to read. There was also an abundance of interesting vocab, although perhaps not all ...

Oh, wow. This was so powerful! Every line was like a stab to the gut - and beieve me, I'm not easy to stir. I also really liked your style ...

I really liked this story! It was creative, with good vocabulary and I thought it was excellently described. However, of course, I do have some constructive criticizm for you. Like ...