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Re: Textbook Reading
I have never read a poem like this before, but I loved it. I can totally relate to you and your poem. Great job.
Oct 27, 2020 -
Re: The Gates
You are off to a great start. Your rhyming was great along with your use of punctuation. Everything flowed perfectly, and I can't wait to read the next part. Great ...
Oct 27, 2020 -
Re: A Follow up
I loved it over all, but I have to agree with Omer, the last part of a poem has to be powerful. It has to leave the reader with something ...
Oct 27, 2020 -
Re: a hazy shade of winter
Nice job with the imagery!
Oct 27, 2020