LMJRayner

Thanks a lot. I always like writing villians, they always seem more fun to create. LMJ

This was a chapter in one of the books I'm writing alongside my normal stuff and I liked it so much I made it into a short story :) Thanks ...

Thanks very much for the review, I'm glad you saw something in it and that's why I write right there. Cheers, LMJ

Thanks, rhyming is always the funnest and hardest part of writing poetry, for me anyway. Cheers, LMJ

Breaking the pattern was intentional, I'm seeing her for the first time again, forgetting about before and it starts all over again. The capitals represent this. That's how I see ...

Thanks, the full stops weren't needed when I wrote this properly, I had spaced each stanza but the formatting gets a little weird on this site. I have added the ...

Cheers, nice reviews are always helpful :) Glad you enjoyed it, I seem to have a scan read editing affliction that annoys me more than the reader. I will clean ...

Thanks very much for the review, I'm glad you found it an interesting read. Funny thing is I wrote this entire thing on a plane. Cheers, LMJ

Thanks for the comment, I am new to poetry writing wise and I wanted to have a go at the rhyming side of it whilst still keeping the message, in ...

I wrote this on the train in a haste ha, it definitely needs reworking rhyming wise, thanks for the input. LMJ

Cheers for the review, poetry is very new to me at the moment so structure and rhyming are stuff I need to work on. I looked up the spelling of ...