LMAuthor312

I really, really like what you've written here. It's slightly suspenseful and eerie. I had to reread it a couple of times because I felt like I kept missing pieces ...

I am in awe at your decision to cut out all social media in your life. Really. This may seem like a simple or ludicrous feeling to some, but social ...

Hey there! Great story and I love where you're going with it. I'm kind of just reviewing and reading the other chapters you have as I go along. There were ...

Very well written! I love all the descriptions and imagery. It really helps form the story. However, I feel like we're lacking a lot of back story and details, even ...

Pretty good story. I really want to know what happens next. I think you need to establish our narrator a little bit better. I don't know who's mind we are ...

Good story. It felt a little choppy with the way you have it formatted. You also used "said" a lot when your characters communicated and it got a bit boring ...