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Re: Yesterday
I adore this script SOOOOOOO much. I very rarely read scripts, but I've trying to branch out, genre-wise, in my reading habits. (I don't know if this is your intention, ...
Jan 18, 2018 -
Re: Sientite: Prologue
I want to see the rest of this story. I really do. Mainly so I can figure out what on earth happened here. It seemed very interesting and lots of ...
Jan 2, 2018 -
Re: What Keeps You Up At Night
I really like this. I feel like this sometimes, and I'm lucky enough to have a friend like the one in the poem. Everyone deserves someone like that. As to ...
Jan 2, 2018 -
Re: Somebody For Me
I love the repetition and the bitter-sweetly relatable characters. I just want to reach into the poem and give the characters a couple of big hugs. Rivers signify change, and ...
Jan 2, 2018 -
Re: my demon
Anger, huh? This is a poem which anyone can easily relate to. It's clear and concise, yet well-thought out. I really feel like you've put your whole heart and soul ...
Jan 1, 2018 -
Re: Adventures with My Time-Traveling Uncle - Chapter One
Hey, Allie! This is really great! I love it when stories start by explaining that all of what is about to related is a flashback. Your narration is well-developed and ...
Jan 1, 2018 -
Re: "The Truth about Hamsters"
Hey, Allie! I can't believe that I've known you this long and you never told me what a talent you have for horror! Anyways, I love this story! It was ...
Jan 1, 2018 -
Re: The girl in the woods- Chapter one
Hmm....Curiouser and curiouser....(Sorry! I couldn't help it!) Matthew seems like a sweetheart, but I have a feeling that most of the story will be about him as a teenager and/or ...
Jan 1, 2018 -
Re: What About Angels?
There were some grammar errors I'll admit, but I won't go into them- I'll leave that to the seasoned veterans, thank you very much. The first thing I have to ...
Jan 1, 2018 -
Re: Crystal Clear Chapter One: Speechless Affairs
WHY!?! WHY AREN'T THERE MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS GLORIOUS STORY?!?!?! I really like Meissa- young but secretly powerful girl are my weakness. I'm also glad that this story has a ...
Jan 1, 2018
