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  • Script » Film, Romantic Re: Yesterday

    I adore this script SOOOOOOO much. I very rarely read scripts, but I've trying to branch out, genre-wise, in my reading habits. (I don't know if this is your intention, ...

    Jan 18, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Sientite: Prologue

    I want to see the rest of this story. I really do. Mainly so I can figure out what on earth happened here. It seemed very interesting and lots of ...

    Jan 2, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: What Keeps You Up At Night

    I really like this. I feel like this sometimes, and I'm lucky enough to have a friend like the one in the poem. Everyone deserves someone like that. As to ...

    Jan 2, 2018
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Narrative Re: Somebody For Me

    I love the repetition and the bitter-sweetly relatable characters. I just want to reach into the poem and give the characters a couple of big hugs. Rivers signify change, and ...

    Jan 2, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: my demon

    Anger, huh? This is a poem which anyone can easily relate to. It's clear and concise, yet well-thought out. I really feel like you've put your whole heart and soul ...

    Jan 1, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Science Fiction Re: Adventures with My Time-Traveling Uncle - Chapter One

    Hey, Allie! This is really great! I love it when stories start by explaining that all of what is about to related is a flashback. Your narration is well-developed and ...

    Jan 1, 2018
  • Short Story » Humor, Horror Re: "The Truth about Hamsters"

    Hey, Allie! I can't believe that I've known you this long and you never told me what a talent you have for horror! Anyways, I love this story! It was ...

    Jan 1, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Science Fiction Re: The girl in the woods- Chapter one

    Hmm....Curiouser and curiouser....(Sorry! I couldn't help it!) Matthew seems like a sweetheart, but I have a feeling that most of the story will be about him as a teenager and/or ...

    Jan 1, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: What About Angels?

    There were some grammar errors I'll admit, but I won't go into them- I'll leave that to the seasoned veterans, thank you very much. The first thing I have to ...

    Jan 1, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Supernatural Re: Crystal Clear Chapter One: Speechless Affairs

    WHY!?! WHY AREN'T THERE MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS GLORIOUS STORY?!?!?! I really like Meissa- young but secretly powerful girl are my weakness. I'm also glad that this story has a ...

    Jan 1, 2018


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