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Oh my gosh this is one of the best pieces of poetry I have ever had the honor of reading... thank you

Thank you it helps a lot.

First off I'd like to thank you both for the comments/suggestions. As to your question prepareyourself2 as to why Nora thought to her sister " You think you're funny don't ...

I think this could be a good poem, but it needs to be longer and be more... LIke StoryWeaver13 said it needs to be more dramatic.

I think this could be a good poem, but it needs to be longer and be more... LIke StoryWeaver13 said it needs to be more dramatic.

I really loved the depths that you went to and like Apple said it was a very well written piece .

I think you need to elaborate on what and how she ended up in the suicide proof room. But otherwise I liked it.

I really liked the idea of the whole thing and was very intrigued but you need to go a little more in depth, how did these men come to know ...

Thank you for your review. I see what you are saying,but the fact that her husband is abusive is the reason she wants to leave and as in many cases ...

Thank you. I appreciate all the comments and critiques they are very helpful. Thank you jaceclayton

sorry about the first line it just won't stay where I put it grrr :(

Thank you. all of the comments and critiques.

I really liked this work. I thought it was sad that she felt that she had to perfect her work because her parents would not accept any less. Emily is ...

I know you don't really get much of a feel for the characters but I wrote another version and just introduced all the characters at once and a lot of ...

Hey awesome story. as you know I love it