Kyuuketsuki

This poem... wow, it's beautiful. You've probably heard it a few times already, but this describes Winter well. The stanzas per letter sound great. I apologise for the lack of ...

As FalingIntoAbyss said, there's a few mistakes. It made me stumble slightly reading it. "Sometimes I wish he's answer his phone." *He'd. He's would mean "he is/was". The ending was ...

Looks like a good story, I like it so far. Just a hint, try to space the chapters out. You'll want to post one chapter now and then. And a ...

Possibly the names? Aww, c'mon. You gotta tell us the names, Kam-kun. Soo... it looks like the grandfather has powers. Wow. I can't wait to see your next part. I ...

I really like the way you did this. It's really shows a picture. "Late at night it comes clawing at the door, human no more." It could be just me, ...

Hmm... well, I'm new to the reviewing thing but I'll give it a shot. Nice job on the poem, I like the content. The rythm is a bit off for ...