Kylan

Hunter: I will readily admit that I don't know as much as you concerning guns. But I was just working off of the above article and the fact that there ...

Well, she specifically told us the the gun was a Magnum. So... it wouldn't have a silver finish. In regards to Paige loading the gun: that could be the case ...

Would it be possible to give us an english version as well? -Kylan

Okay. Game over. Finito. Though you did a good job writing this portion of the story - the story in general for that matter - I feel there are a ...

Hey there Cuni. I just recently noticed your shoutout on my profile. I'm sorry I didn't continue reading this piece, but you made it sound like you didn't really want ...

Hey everyone! Thanks for your comments. I'll have to admit, this was an extremely rough draft. The idea came to me and I just had to jot it down. Some ...

Thanks you two for taking a look at this. BBB >> That is one of the best compliments I have ever received. Thank you. fishr >> This is actually a ...

Okay, first of all, no one is going to steal this. For multiple reasons. And don't worry about that here, anyway. YWS is safe. One hundred percent. I had mixed ...

Okay, there are some problems with this piece. There are problems with most fantasy. It's a fact of life. Tolkein set us all up for generations of cliche and repetition. ...

(BTW way, cool nick, really matches with my story), Heh, it's not a nick, it's my legal name, printed on my birth certificate with grade A ink. :wink: Anyway, in ...

Well, if you have two opposing viewpoints, the subject is null and void. That means that, as of so far, you should keep the piece the way it is. But ...

Well, I can't suggest how to start something like this. It's your story, it's your style. My only warning was to stay away from cliches and to take a more ...

There is a sequel, dear Johnny! Honor is a novel. You can click on my portfolio and find Honor #s 1-7 :wink: . And yes. About the gun. "The man" ...

i thought about making the Marines imbibe some form of alcohol, but then i thought one might question why a group of Marines, officers, no less, would be drinking a ...

Jabber, I honestly don't know what I would do without you. I feel so embarassed, though, that you had to see all those typos! :oops: I fixed them. And some ...