Kylan

Brandon - Nice to see you here! I swear, if you want your writing to improve by lightyears, this is the place for you. People will give an honest opinion ...

Jiggity - I seem to vaguely remember reading something like this. Someone being chased, a large wall, crystals and magisters and such. I remember not liking it all that much. ...

Conrad - An interesting morsel. Kind of like a truffle after dinner. Nothing really too heavy about it, but enough to leave a fun aftertaste. Alainna gave some good line-by-lines. ...

Jared - I didn't like this. I realize you were more or less forced into writing this, and that this is probably your first draft and I also realize that ...

Gahks - This was good, if not a little predictable and overused. You obviously have a confident grasp on the intracasies of the poetic language. Now, I think, you just ...

Conrad - I'm interested to know where you plan on taking Creep. In other words, I'm interested to know what kind of plot twists you have in store for us, ...

Clo - I like this piece. At first, I didn't, but after reading it a second time and putting into perspective with the title, it kinda grew on me. The ...

Conrad - I thought that there was a little too much telling here, and I'm not sure how I feel about being addressed directly (the whole second-person bit) -- it ...

Angel - It's been a while since I've looked at anything of yours, and so I'm assuming that this story is written using a new, experimental style. It's nice to ...

AudreyViolet6 -- There comes a point were abstract poetry is no longer poetry at all. I saw a poem once - a published one - where all it was was ...

Hey Jared! This was good, but I enjoyed the last chapter better, I think. It had more conflict, more disaster. In this chapter, things were kind of stagnant, going nowhere. ...

Hey Jared! This was really well written. Geez, you're writing style has matured. I enjoyed the voice of your main character a lot, especially the part where he sinks into ...

Conrad - I really wanted to like this chapter. I did, I did, I did. But I find Creep descending further and further into the pulp fiction, comic-book scene. I ...

Conrad - An interesting chapter. Fun to read and look at, but, as Jiggity said and gave reasons for, kind of unbelievable. It's also somewhat thrown together. How long do ...

Jared - Ah. Finally, the last installment. It wasn't disappointing either. You did well with this and I found myself held very much in suspense throughout. Great job. However, this ...