Kylan

Hey Mickey, This is quality stuff. I was very impressed. You manage to capture this scene with such feeling and grace and experience. The little details, the characterization, are things ...

Demsy -- Interesting piece! I quite liked it! I thought that your concept was nice and you had a couple of lines that I really enjoyed. Good work. However, while ...

Galerius -- Beautiful. This exceeds your other poems both in literary quality and clarity. You have nearly created an epic, I believe. I thoroughly enjoyed the language, the impressions given, ...

Mandorelute -- You have some very nice imagery and language here. I've always enjoyed the colors green, blue, and yellow in reference to literature. They bear such striking impressions and ...

Connie -- A rather uneventful chapter. But I suppose it's necessary? Regardless, and as a result, I don't have much to say about this chapter. Solid writing. The dialogue is ...

Brother Connie -- I'm liking it. It's nice to see that you've started things off without your usual fantastical flair. Is this going to be a fantasy piece? For some ...

Mandorelute -- Very nice piece. It seemed to blend the best of both traditional and contemporary poetry, by first following a specific, meaningful pattern, but also free to roam past ...

Jon -- Quick, summary review for you tonight. You're definately improving. Like Demi, there are things I like about this, and things I don't like. This is really not all ...

Galerius -- Here, as promised. I liked how this poem felt. I like the feelings and the images it gave me. I get a very post-apocalyptic, mythological feeling. Where you, ...

Hannah -- Decided you should top me, huh? Kylan can't do it right, so I'll just do it better. :wink: Just kidding. I'm really glad I kindasorta inspired (willed) you ...

Jon -- As I'm sure everyone else has pointed out, this poem is exceptionally wordy. This seems to be a poem in which you're attempting to showcase your extensive vocabularly ...

Conrad -- Hm. Or, as Rorshach would say, hurm . I'm not sure what to make of this piece. I don't think I like it very much. It smacks of ...

Jasmine -- Wonderful. I enjoyed this poem very much. You had a marvelous balance between meaning and language, between showing and telling. I particularly enjoyed your use of imagery, your ...

Jabbers -- I don't know...I can't really say I'm much of a fan of this poem. It has at least two of the three things I do not like in ...

Galerius -- I've read some of you poetry before. You're very talented when it comes to manipulating words into these sprawling images and concepts. You're very talented at creating certain ...